(While you waited for me To define words I had you …) When I pretend.. I’m exactly like what You’d always wanted to see Blinding the notion Of myself The idea to be free And while I regretted inside I was committed to be Something on the outside The fact that I Took what I hated And made it a part of me Is burning me, I try Still I can’t hide The cause of our downside Now we wonder What’s real in this So called wonderland The seeds we sowed down Are now the same thorns Pricking our hands We’re both out of time And this is how We see it all unwind The sacrifice of us Hiding from the light Into the lies The sacrifice of us Being blind, and Never looking behind And how do you define words? The very things That help you put feelings In a straight line The feelings that are now Dangling behind Worn out of our lies Shattered into a thousand Tiny hearts, almost Like tiny shards Still left undefined.
‘The feelings that are now
Dangling behind
Worn out of our lies
Shattered into a thousand
Tiny hearts, almost
Like tiny shards
Still left undefined.’ Loved this!
That was a powerful piece, AB. Perfectly penned.
Wow.. amazing lines..loved it 💫😊
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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This is absolutely fabulous , AB. The imagery and flow are incredible . Powerful piece. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! Your words always mean so much to me ❤❤
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My pleasure, AB💕
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Now we wonder
What’s real in this
So called wonderland
The seeds we sowed down
Are now the same thorns
Pricking our hands
…. Feeling this. Excellent read.
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Thank you so much, Kirsten! So glad you liked it, always nice to hear from you 😊
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This is beautiful…♥
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Thank you so much! So happy to see this comment ❤
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‘The feelings that are now
Dangling behind
Worn out of our lies
Shattered into a thousand
Tiny hearts, almost
Like tiny shards
Still left undefined.’ Loved this!
That was a powerful piece, AB. Perfectly penned.
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Thanks a lot, Shruthi! Your words always mean a lot, thank you for all the support ❤
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You’re welcome!
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Very thought provoking, this piece really resonates with me intellectually and emotionally.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you could find a connection 🙂
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