My spirit’s sleeping cold In the dark I’m just a nuisance Without a soul Come, dive deep with me When the bell rings We can’t leave Remember, what seems normal Isn’t what’s real The drop of water That touches the ground Has got to rise up again Remake that sound And the next time Blood is what falls down There’s a sinner in us The rage, the idea That draws fear The Gods of death And us, we’re all alike Trapping souls Whoever falls near We’re all reaping Washing ourselves free Changing shapes, possessed Of deranged thoughts Being the catalyst The effect and the cause.. I see bodies on the floor Pretending to be dead And the bell rings again The falling droplet rises up And so does everyone else Killing each other, they’ve Started turning the water red.. And as soon as the drop forms I’m drawn out of the scene Cold sweats, pounding heart Gasp for breath, I scream (dong) I hear the bell again.. The drops re-form.. The dead are here Reaping lives, this time In its true form.
Thereβs a sinner in us
The rage, the idea
That draws fear
The Gods of death
And us, weβre all alike
..Deadly lines!! Just wowβ€
Well penned, bhaiyaππ
This was so dark with brilliant imagery that made it kind of nightmarish in my head (in the most amazing way!) A breathtaking and wonderfully written piece, AB. Loved this!
It is actually a nightmare I had a few days ago that I tried to put into words. Thank you for all the support and for such a lovely comment, Shruthi! Really appreciate it π
Woaahh!!!!! Your writing skills are next level truly, wonderful poem !!
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Thank you so much, Khushi! I’m humbled and so so grateful! This means a lot, hope you’re having a lovely day π
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Breathtaking!
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Thanks a lot, Tracy! I’m glad you liked it, thanks for leaving a comment. This really means a lot. Have a lovely day π
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I felt like I could actually hear the bell… wonderful piece!
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Thank you so much, Snehal π
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This is so profound and wonderfully penned, AB!!
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Thank you so much, Deeksha! I’m so glad you liked it π
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Thereβs a sinner in us
The rage, the idea
That draws fear
The Gods of death
And us, weβre all alike
..Deadly lines!! Just wowβ€
Well penned, bhaiyaππ
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It took me a while to figure out that part. Thank you so much, Aayushi! Always happy to see your comment β€β€
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This was amazing, AB. Beautifully written and so profound . Love it.π
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Thanks a lot, Grace! So glad you liked it β€β€
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I sure did. My pleasure.π
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This was so dark with brilliant imagery that made it kind of nightmarish in my head (in the most amazing way!) A breathtaking and wonderfully written piece, AB. Loved this!
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It is actually a nightmare I had a few days ago that I tried to put into words. Thank you for all the support and for such a lovely comment, Shruthi! Really appreciate it π
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Youβre welcome, AB!
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Wowβ¦π³
Akshay, this is amazing!
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Is it? Haha!
Thank you, Sirishty! That’s very sweet of you π
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Wonderful poem and vivid thoughts. These lines really stuck with me, so relatable and real:
Washing ourselves free
Changing shapes, possessed
Of deranged thoughts
Being the catalyst
The effect and the cause..
Thank you for sharing AB!
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, Kirsten! So glad you could find something relatable π
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Woaaahhh!! This is amazing!! So so profound and wonderfully written β€οΈ
Loved it!
Like always, very well penned
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Thanks a lot, Ahiri! So glad you liked it π
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Wow! Beautiful lines! Well shared ππβΊ
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Thank you, Priti Ji π
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You are welcome π stay blessed π€π₯°
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Very intense and powerful. You see into unseen realms. βοΈπ Peace be upon you, Creative.
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Thanks a lot, Kay! Really happy to see your comment π
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Wow, beautifully penned ππ
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Thank you π
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This is such a beautiful poetry dear. Keep up
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it π
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Wow, dark and breathtaking!
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Thank you, Journey!
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Always!
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