She’s got something about her She can’t be manipulated Carefree, stubborn Wild, always wears a smile She fakes a laugh And even the glitter in her eyes She’s been playing hard to get Only wants love Don’t know how to keep up She loves when guys fall for her Loves their “I LOVE YOUsss” But never wants to give it back Don’t know how to choose There’s something about her That sets her apart Don’t give a shit about things Won’t let you inside her heart She’s not known for her anger But knows how to be sad Wants to live life a bit younger Likes to play a little bad She’s got something about her Her tresses wave around Dancing in the cool breeze Her hands glide past as she moves And you can feel her breathe There’s something about her She can’t be manipulated Chose to break a heart To look out for love Said someone forced her To do what she did, not proud of it She’s got tons of troubles Far off to run away from Has a heart full of sweetness Always wanting a little more Of the love that never got around Don’t know how to make decisions Never holds a thought for too long Loves being mischievous Lots of desires to choose from I know a girl In a far away land There’s something about her Little fear, little regret And an endless amount of love For me to forget.
Alaska Young is a character from John Green’s Looking for Alaska (which also is my favourite book) she’s is enigmatic, in search for love and everything you described in your poem. You should read it if you are into Fiction
She sounds so amazing! This poem reminded me of someone very close to me. Keep writing ♥
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That was the idea. Thank you so much Sonali. Glad you like it ❤️❤️
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Loved it ♥♥
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❤️❤️
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This is such a lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you so much ❤️
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Welcome 🙂
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Hey you’re amazing 🤩 I’m glad to have found your blog..well done 👏
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That’s really sweet of you. Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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Most welcome ❣ Awaiting more…
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I’ll try to keep you intrigued 🙂
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She seems unreal…🙂 Beautifully written
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I wish she was 🙂 Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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She reminds me of Alaska Young (LFA)
Beautifully written
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I have absolutely no idea who that is, but knowing that it made you think about someone really makes me happy. Thank you so much ❤❤
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Alaska Young is a character from John Green’s Looking for Alaska (which also is my favourite book) she’s is enigmatic, in search for love and everything you described in your poem. You should read it if you are into Fiction
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Oh, okay! I’m really selective about reading stuff, but maybe I’ll give it a try. Thanks though!
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Intrigue… may be, this is your version of yourself!! Well done! 😀
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Well, my version of myself would be a whole lot different, haha!! Thanks for your comment though, means a lot ❤️
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Loved this piece, not the stereotypically molded poem about a saccharine girl but a real woman seen through unbiased eyes. Well done ❤
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Thank you so much Neelam! I’m so happy to see this comment, really means a lot. You made my day ❤
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You’re welcome 😉
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She sounds so wonderful and intriguing. Beautifully written.
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She is..
Thank you, Journey ❤
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You’re very welcome!
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She is so amazinggg!!
A real woman through an unbiased eyes is what I could see ❤️
Very well penned!
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Thank you so much, Ahiri! I’m glad you understood the idea behind this ❤️
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How does this just keep getting better?! Love it ❤
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Aww.. that’s really sweet! Thank you so much! So so happy to see this comment ❤❤
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Amazing, AB. Love it.💕
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Thank you, Grace ❤❤
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My pleasure.💕
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While reading this I felt like she was so familiar and special; I love it. A real woman indeed.
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I’m glad you got the idea. Thank you for such a lovely comment, Kirsten!
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This is so wonderful 👏👏
Happy New Year AB !
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Thank you, Kriti!
Wish you a very Happy New Year too! Lots of love and wishes 😊
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So good AB. You have crafted this piece so well, it’s captivating to read 👌👏
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Thanks, Bree! I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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