Floating, swirling The colors seem too clean All the day’s torture And the noises Are like washed away Sunsets aren’t just to see They are to feel The mirror you look into When you re-roll your reel The colors speak To some, they are satisfying To others, a reason to cry To take out everything All at once Or just keep it inside Have a look again as it comes Part of the sky is blue Fading away, watching it’s doom The pink part Settling with things The grip getting loose And the magic ends too soon No surprise.. I’d better keep everything inside Let things be locked Create a whole new sky Paint my own colors Let no one else decide Coz this is my sky My sunset And I’ll make it last Until I die.
Actually this was my first post here and I didn’t want to start with a dark one.
Thank you for the comment, Snehal! It’s always nice to hear from you 😊
So beautifully described AB!
Loved the whole piece as always..every line..
Especially ” The mirror you look into when you re-roll your reel”- it’s beautiful ❤️
Keep creating more! And we’ll be waiting to read them! Lots of love
And damnn!! Yes yess!
“Create a whole new sky
Paint my own colors
Let no one else decide
Coz this is my sky
My sunset
And I’ll make it last
Until I die.” This line carries so much positivity and hope!! Bestt
Thank you so much, Ahiri! I feel out of words. It’s very sweet of you to say that. Thank you for all the love and support, this really means a lot. I feel so so happy reading your comment. You have a lovely day, lots of love to you as well ❤
Loved it😍
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Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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Amazing brother💖
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Thank you bhai ❤️❤️
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Beautiful picture and words
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The picture’s sort of blurry but I guess the words made up for it.
I can’t thank you enough, Journey! So glad to see all these comments ❤️
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The colors stand out and yes, the words make up for the rest. You’re so welcome. I’m slowly going through your amazing work!
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An overwhelming desire of building a world of your own is clearly stated in your words. I hope the sun shines brighter there.👏🏻👏🏻
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That’s really sweet of you. Thank you so much, I wish you the same ❤
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It’s beautiful Akshay🌅 loved it!
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Thank you so much, Sirishty! I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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🤩ahh beuatiful description!
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Thank you, Riya! This means a lot 😊
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Beautiful!
(Can’t believe you wrote it, coz it’s so un-dark)
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Actually this was my first post here and I didn’t want to start with a dark one.
Thank you for the comment, Snehal! It’s always nice to hear from you 😊
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This is beautiful 👌.
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Thank you, Eunice! I’m glad you liked it 😊
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‘The mirror you look into when you re-roll your reel’ – I really like this line!
Beautiful poem, AB! Loved it!
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Ah, that line is special to me.
Thank you so much, Shruthi! Your comments make me really happy 😊
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My pleasure, AB!
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So beautiful , AB. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! I’m so glad you enjoyed it ❤❤
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I sure did. My pleasure.💕
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Coz this is my sky
My sunset
And I’ll make it last
Until I die.
Love this. Beautiful and motivational, thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much, Kirsten! That’s really sweet of you! I’m glad it touched you ❤
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You’re welcome!
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Create a whole new sky
Paint my own colors
Let no one else decide
Coz this is my sky
My sunset
And I’ll make it last
Until I die.
Yes! Yes! Yes! A beautiful sky of yours❤❤
This is just so so beautiful, bhaiya!💕
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Thank you so much, Aayushi! That’s so so sweet of you! Thank you for all the love and support ❤❤
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So beautifully described AB!
Loved the whole piece as always..every line..
Especially ” The mirror you look into when you re-roll your reel”- it’s beautiful ❤️
Keep creating more! And we’ll be waiting to read them! Lots of love
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And damnn!! Yes yess!
“Create a whole new sky
Paint my own colors
Let no one else decide
Coz this is my sky
My sunset
And I’ll make it last
Until I die.” This line carries so much positivity and hope!! Bestt
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Thank you so much, Ahiri! I feel out of words. It’s very sweet of you to say that. Thank you for all the love and support, this really means a lot. I feel so so happy reading your comment. You have a lovely day, lots of love to you as well ❤
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My pleasure AB! So happy I could make u feel a bit more happier with a tiny comment of mine! So kind and sweet of you ❤️
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Awww ! Such a beautiful one. Very well penned.
Every sunset has its own beauty that can not match with others and what you describes is so amazing. 😊😊
Keep writing AB !
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Thank you so much, Kriti! That’s really sweet of you, I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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